Sunday, October 21, 2012

Tsunami warning

I read few pages from the tsunami warning its written by Taylor Morrison . I didn't recommend this book for several reasons . Firstly , I think that it will be more unique from the other book and it include story . What happened is while I'm reading I didn't notice any differences from other books . The drawing was very dark and it take almost the paper area ! The writer suppose to focus in the way he show . The writer needs to describe more details ! . Take for example he wrote that " Military personnel carried injured people to get medical treatment " he didn't mentioned the type of injured and how many the people ! It was a such boring sentence . 

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